All Comments on 'Taking My Darling Maria Ch. 02'

This is AMAZING!!

I cannot WAIT for the next part!

Beautiful. Thank you.

Finally a good new story! Please try to finish it. There's nothing worse than unfinished story that had a great potential!

I like the characters and their chemistry. Good story!

Thanks for the support, guys! I definitely will continue this story, but I am not quite sure if I'll be able to finish and submit it as quickly as I did with this one. In any case, there is definitely more to come. Kaleb isn't done with Maria yet ;)

I love this story I can't wait till your update !

You definitely have potential and this story is great so far! Please, have a nice talk scene between them because it needs to be explained about whether or not he can read minds, since he knew her name but didn't say anything about it in the chapter from his point of view. And I can't wait to see what her friend Becky says about this and her maybe being missing!

great Vampire Story as i like em...with a happy end.:) 5 stars.

I keep checking back for the next chapter! Love it! Can't wait to see what happens next, you're amazing!

Hope you will update soon! I really can't wait to see where this story goes.

This story is just... Awesome! Cant wait for mote XD

Please please continue this story! Your writing is amazing

Great story

I need more your killing me here

Good story update plzz

OMG! This is so good and you left us with a cliffhanger. TT I realy really need to know what happens next....even though this comment was posted really late.....but still please continue.

What happened to chapter 3 - 5?