All Comments on 'Taking Some Pictures Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

me and my wife loved your story finished it a while ago but had other things to do before writing the review lol

lisning2yalisning2yaover 6 years ago
Well Done

Enjoyed both chapters and look forward to #3. Have always enjoyed erotic photography.

WatcherRobWatcherRobover 6 years ago
Nice.... Butt

This was going really well until the anal sex business enters the story. Not sure that should have been included in a "first encounter" .

Other than that the couple's emotional traumas and nervousness were well played.

I've tried to put myself realistically as either men in the story, not sure I could do it - it being all that was going on.

Robbert1953Robbert1953almost 2 years ago

Please excuse my language but " That was Fucking Hotttt. Well written and very sexy. Thanks for sharing.

greasedsilvergreasedsilveralmost 2 years ago

I loved it, however, after 4 years I am compelled to ask if we may have a continuation to at least get a conclusion. I've run quite a few in my mind yet not as finely tuned as your writing could create. So... please, after 4 years, would you write another chapter? Even if it were just an epilogue would be appreciated.

photokenphotoken6 months ago

Thank you for a great story! I would vote for more chapters.

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