by PickFiction
me and my wife loved your story finished it a while ago but had other things to do before writing the review lol
Enjoyed both chapters and look forward to #3. Have always enjoyed erotic photography.
This was going really well until the anal sex business enters the story. Not sure that should have been included in a "first encounter" .
Other than that the couple's emotional traumas and nervousness were well played.
I've tried to put myself realistically as either men in the story, not sure I could do it - it being all that was going on.
Please excuse my language but " That was Fucking Hotttt. Well written and very sexy. Thanks for sharing.
I loved it, however, after 4 years I am compelled to ask if we may have a continuation to at least get a conclusion. I've run quite a few in my mind yet not as finely tuned as your writing could create. So... please, after 4 years, would you write another chapter? Even if it were just an epilogue would be appreciated.