All Comments on 'Taking What's His Pt. 03'

So what is "his" name besides daddy? I love the story was just wondering..

I'm not really sure. I haven't really thought of one. This story is very much just a rough draft. I'm open for suggestions though!! So glad you like the story. :)

This story has great build up, but I always feel the climax parts are too fast. I know sex scenes can be fast, but I wish there was more dialogue. Like it took you several paragraphs to get to the cherry popping part, but only a handful of sentences for the actual sex. See what I mean?

Zodia195 Thanks for the feedback! I thought the same thing but I just got kinda stuck. My effort to try and make the scene longer isn't very perfect. It's definitely something I'm working on. As this is a work in progress I'm sure it will get better over time.

Great story, touched on so many of my deep dark desires. Please continue. Would love to see her pregnant with "daddys" baby...

BRAVO. Thoroughly enjoyed but have to agree that the actual sex could have been further explored. Can’t wait for the next one!!!

Please update soon !!!

Honestly one of the best stories I’ve read on this site and it was exactly what I was looking for and it really satisfied my deepest darkest fantasy. I loved it and I’m eagerly waiting for more! Though, I have to agree that the Dailogue could have been more during the sex scene. Also, I would love to see Claire getting punished and really enjoying it, to the surprise of her captor. And maybe she can even discover and assert her dominance over him by discovering how much she affects him and teasing and torturing him, and making him crave her....which will eventually lead to fiery sex😜🔥

Damn it! Another awesome story that will never be finished. What is wrong with writers on this site?