All Comments on 'Tales of War Pt. 02'

You need to be consistent. You said at the beginning of the chapter that she didn't even own a bathing suit and no guy had seen her naked. Then you said she had sex with two men. I would have liked her to stay a virgin.

But still a very likeable and humiliating read. Vile scamper does love to torment his subjects.

I hoped more details across the sexual scenes. All of it goes too quickly