All Comments on 'Talking It Up With Jill Ch. 03'

I gave it a 5!!!!! And I hope dear annony, eats shit and dies

I read this story a while ago, it was great then and now, please continue.

I enjoyed it although I think the main character louis is a little over the top. Especially in the second chapter.

The sex acts are pretty limited in scope and I think you could improve it there. After all beds were invented for a reason. A little bed hopping at night would not have been amiss.

Hope to see more from you.

Minor: heals should be heels! Site should be sight.

but the disgusting shit that it is. When are you going to bring in the donkey? Oh, you already have.

Everyone has different tastes so if this is not to your liking then just move along. There are people that ENJOY this type of story and jack7 does a great job writing this fantasy for those people. Thank you for the great stories jack7 and I look forward to chapter 4!

Great writing dude. Loved all your stories.

But I can't believe neither of them would not at some time laid her down and eaten her out. I also would have figured when she did suck Harvey he would have held his self in the back of her throat and pumped a load into her belly.

I sometimes get my jolly doing that.

It would have been nice too, to have had Harvey covering her as he tried driving her ass through the cot.

Read what he said. He's a lonely and sad little cock old man whose wife fucked him over and I'm glad

Superlative writing for Lit. but editing is needed. I had trouble picturing the last scene in the shower; a fuller description of the physical layout would have added to the sexual tension. And when Jill sucks Harvey's cock she starts by letting loose her hair, but a few minutes later it is described as being in a ponytail. None the less, a hot story with good dialogue, interesting characters, and lots of sexual tension.

I forgot how much I love this series. Can't wait for the next chapter

Wifey liked it, too. A lot!

This is one of the hottest stories on the site! Loved the fantasy wife rape at the beginning and the hot talk. Hubby really likes to see his wife take strange cock and wifey is more than willing to oblige him...and she gets off on it, too! So, wifey likes being held so she can't move while the men take her hard, cum in her, and hubby wants the men to be angry with her? Sounds rapey to me. This fell a little short of that but if another trip to the cabin could be arranged...The men could play act, too, like wifey did dressing up, and hubby could sit back and watch his wife take a good hard pounding on a bed, her fingernails digging into the man's back, her feet flying all over the place, and her face barely visible from under a broad shoulder. She could then show her appreciation in the time honored manner...with her mouth.

Third times the charm, they say. Things I'd like to see: Jill taken in the missionary position; more kissing and expressions of affection with the men; Jill servicing both men orally and not merely as foreplay; and Jill interacting more with the men while they ravish her. It's hot reading about a self-possessed, cultured, and educated woman enjoying the pleasures of taboo sex. I want to hear her confess her sluttiness to the men and to her husband. I want to read how she enjoys it so intensely that her husband worries about what he has unleashed. I want them to return to each other's arms with loving reassurances...only to do it again.

One of the hottest series on Lit

jack7, I don,t know what you do for a living? but this kind of writing(Art) that comes out of You ... breaks every single Rating / Standard here on literotica or anywhere else for that matter, which so commonly uses the two over rated words - Erotic Stories, and your writing is anything but common .

Your masterful storytelling is built upon real to life feelings, that breath and blossom into a hungry need to want Jill for ones self, through your well narrated and cared for character building.The passion/Taboo and the lust you describe with words here, jumps out with detailed pictures, that leave a longing and an in print in ones Mind, even after reading your chapters several times over . Wow ! is an understatement ...

You plant your erotic thoughts here and there throughout your story, like seeds that are ready to spout at any time, and its this timing it right and delaying of real life events and happenings around your characters lives, that give it that sensual 3D effect into this make believe story line you Master so well !

I have this feeling of you holding Jill's character on a fine line, between a slut and a lady who loves her husband, but also loves her sex just as much, which keeps this story fresh and open, not knowing where she will draw the line for her husband, or if she will ever break out on her very own mind lust, which could take this story into a whole new Taboo.

I can honestly say that you jack7- are a Master Erotic story writer ! and you should be paid $ for your Talent in the Art of Erotica !!!

PS.

if you Build it up, they will cum too read it ...

Thank You! for sharing your Mind and your Art with us

Best Regards ~ Alx

Two "mountain men" - two weeks with a submissive, willing little slut & these two guys don't have her suck their cocks. They don't DP her? Must be California brokeback "mountain men."

The sex scenes are exactly the same..everyone of them,she just backs up to them, not once did they take her like a fukin man would and put her on her back,you wrecked a great story,but thats just my opinion

Was hoping Kane had gone to round up a posse of friends to help out! Loving the series. Ignore the haters; you write well and I look forward to reading more of your work!

This installment is one of the hottest for Jill, taking on 3 different partners separately but repeatedly in some of the most submissive but respectable scenes ever.

Some commenters want Jill to bed-hop, or freely express her undying affection for whoever is conjoined with her, or have face-to-face missionary sex so Louis can be eaten up with envy; that's not Louis' fantasy, so she doesn't engage in it. Jill's fantasy is to fulfill all of Louis' fantasies. Isn't that the ultimate in submissiveness?

So when she later performs some of these sluttier acts, it's even more taboo!

But this is primarily a love story, with lots of great, edgy sex.

Like one commenter said, the rating scale wasn't designed for stories of this level of eroticism.

Jack7, i hope you're doing ok.

Cuck and whorewife take on the mountain men in a sleazy story.

This is some weird variant of the plot for the movie "Deliverance." In the movie, the hillbilly male characters were the gay guys. Here, the city slicker is the one craving a penis and its fluid output. He just needs to have the courage to get it directly from the source. Even though his slut is happy to get fucked by whoever, the cuck will be better off when he finally figures out what he really needs.

So horny would love my wife to do this

Fucking fantastic!

I love this continuing story . So /hot , so arousing . S o satisfying and taking me to a fantasy that I have about my woman being taken and with no protection , over and over again . Her desires unleashed and willingness to satisfy her husband as well as herself because the idea of being shared , turns her on and turning her husband on is very gratifying . I can't wait to read more .

So far so good! I think it would bring it to another level if she were to express love for Kane during a session.