All Comments on 'Talla's Temple Ch. 19'

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KolrinKolrinabout 13 years ago
One hell of a ride

You certainly picked up the pace a bit. Can't wait to see how this continues. I really wonder what they will do about Talla as more and more of these mysterious things happen around her. Someone has to see it and ask questions. Pussy is in for one hell of a time. Please more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Dry opinion

Boring chapter.

katgoddess1katgoddess1about 13 years ago
Interesting world

It would help if the chapters were a little longer. Sometimes I'm left confused and unsatisfied because the story is so complex and You don't give me quite enough to sort it all out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Your Dry Opinion

Gotta complete disagree with your assessment. I feel as I read this chapter that this is wear the climax will kick off from.

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The next chapters of "Two Hundred Dollars More" are up on the Patreon page for anyone subscribing to the $1 tier. https://www.patreon.com/xaviertorch I'm currently also working on the third novel in the Talla's Temple series. My first novel is Talla's Temple. I know, it co...

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