by xtorch
Gotta complete disagree with your assessment. I feel as I read this chapter that this is wear the climax will kick off from.
It would help if the chapters were a little longer. Sometimes I'm left confused and unsatisfied because the story is so complex and You don't give me quite enough to sort it all out.
You certainly picked up the pace a bit. Can't wait to see how this continues. I really wonder what they will do about Talla as more and more of these mysterious things happen around her. Someone has to see it and ask questions. Pussy is in for one hell of a time. Please more!