All Comments on 'Tanning in St. Maarten'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Close Shave

Great story and well written. Would love to read more of this educational endeavor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Pleasant

Average story with plenty of typo's. Even the story description has a typo. They happen just often enough to distract from the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
"From Which I came" is adequate.

you don't need an "in from"!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I liked your story very much. It is VERY ORIGINAL, I would say unique. I gave it a 5- [(☆☆☆☆☆-) 4.6/5.0 = 92% = A]

Looking forward to reading your next story.

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