All Comments on 'TCCS Pt. 03 Ch. 30: The Night Comes to a Close'

It's Going Down Now...

I hope you keep writing these stories, they are really great. So many stories within each story - please keep writing!

Was there a scene with melissa being fucked by Andy? If so where is it?

I've read the first version of this lively tale, then read the up-dated version and I'm wondering if there's more and if so, when will we finally get to read it?

Was sorry to see this story end without the Cox women fulfilling their destines. The principal never had Jenny or Kitty; the coach was never with Candy, Kat or Kitty; the principal never brought the librarian home for a threesome with Candy; the priest, principal and coach never got together for the expected story crescendo -- Only a few of the several story lines you created and hinted at that never came to fruition; threads that were never completed. Instead you created new girls to be seduced and left the original cast hanging. Their introduction made the story lose focus. I was sorry to see that you've apparently let others (Scatwoman) to (poorly) pick the Cox women storyline up at arbitrary points. Again, disappointing. Suggest you finish the Cox women saga (librarian included) in a Part 4 that focuses on them and (if you must) pick up stories of the other girls in separate parts under the Coxville umbrella.

Sneaky short. You need to finish the story. Waiting for Part 4.

Well, the women have no future

Hugh and Stacy was by far the best part of the story. I hope they continue to be good for each other