All Comments on 'Teacher and Another Former Student'

by johndoe112

Sort by:
  • 3 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Looks like a true story.

Looks like a true story. I am a teacher too and I want to fuck some of my students. But never had the freedom to fuck any one as I am married too.

johndoe112johndoe112over 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback

I am new to this. I appreciate the feedback. I will an an editor look this over.

My stories are based on real events so I try to keep them as close to reality as I can (while obviously changing specific details that could identify anyone in real life). As such, I try not to speculate about things outside my knowledge like what the girls were thinking or were attracted to. Just the facts.

SWT3SWT3over 6 years ago
Has potential

Yes, needs more character development and to go a little slower, but it is a good story. Definitely should be ended sooner. All the stuff about later, spending wife's money etc is just distracting. Keep working at it.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous