by johndoe112
Looks like a true story. I am a teacher too and I want to fuck some of my students. But never had the freedom to fuck any one as I am married too.
I am new to this. I appreciate the feedback. I will an an editor look this over.
My stories are based on real events so I try to keep them as close to reality as I can (while obviously changing specific details that could identify anyone in real life). As such, I try not to speculate about things outside my knowledge like what the girls were thinking or were attracted to. Just the facts.
Yes, needs more character development and to go a little slower, but it is a good story. Definitely should be ended sooner. All the stuff about later, spending wife's money etc is just distracting. Keep working at it.