All Comments on 'Teacher and Another Former Student'

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SWT3SWT3over 6 years ago
Has potential

Yes, needs more character development and to go a little slower, but it is a good story. Definitely should be ended sooner. All the stuff about later, spending wife's money etc is just distracting. Keep working at it.

johndoe112johndoe112over 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback

I am new to this. I appreciate the feedback. I will an an editor look this over.

My stories are based on real events so I try to keep them as close to reality as I can (while obviously changing specific details that could identify anyone in real life). As such, I try not to speculate about things outside my knowledge like what the girls were thinking or were attracted to. Just the facts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Looks like a true story.

Looks like a true story. I am a teacher too and I want to fuck some of my students. But never had the freedom to fuck any one as I am married too.

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