All Comments on 'Teacher Observations'

As punishment for writing this tripe.

Go write on the blackboard fifty times

She had nice erect nipples

She had nice erect nipples

She had nice erect nipples

It will still be less than you mentioned in the story

"I'm not sure whether she noticed her nipples or not..."

Do your erections go unnoticed?

Dumb as a sack of rocks.

Boring

I still was somewhat turned on by this story. Maybe I wanted to be 'the stranger,' and to interfere with the nacent lovemakng of a newly-formed sexual couple.

Anne nonomous

I often read negative comments and feel they are from jealous would-be writers. I found this story erotic, which is the object of the exercise. There were a few mistakes, but none of us who submit to this site will ever win a Pulitzer Prize for Literature. It was meant to be about voyeurism, and it was. I think it is a very good effort, and I am looking forward to the sequel.