All Comments on 'Teaching John'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Awesome!

Great loving story! 5 all day!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Kink

More Chastity blue balls

RegretsRegretsover 3 years ago
Too wooden

I think that you will improve if you write more. The dialogue is too much of the you-say-this-and-I-will-say-that kind. As for a guy agreeing to put a cage back on once he is free-he won’t. He will promise to, but later. All sorts of things can happen if you just stick any old cage onto a dick, the public hairs can suddenly pinch in the rings as you go about. It is a very unpleasant unique kind of pain. Far better to develop your skill giving us the dialogue as she convinces him, or (better) demands that he will be wearing a cage....and describe how she removes his pubic hair and carefully measures for a close but comfortable fit, before buying. It is dialogue that we crave, and both sides can not be equal when there is a cage.

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