by zack1981
Very solid story, left me hanging a little so I am looking forward to the next chapter
This is a nice start to your story. I wouldn't listen to much to the Anonymous comments since they don't even have the courage to make an account. You do need to do more proof reading in your future stories. All in all a really good start.
Lesson one, always swap cum with your lady. I'm dying to get to lesson two!
While your story needs editing do, please, continue.
Please continue!it will be a nice story!and it would take BostonSnowBall to bring up the snowballing lol xD