All Comments on 'Teaching the Pool Boy'

by zack1981

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Yes please continue

Very solid story, left me hanging a little so I am looking forward to the next chapter

hardheadd1hardheadd1almost 11 years ago
Nice

This is a nice start to your story. I wouldn't listen to much to the Anonymous comments since they don't even have the courage to make an account. You do need to do more proof reading in your future stories. All in all a really good start.

BostonsnowballBostonsnowballalmost 11 years ago
Yes, Please!

Lesson one, always swap cum with your lady. I'm dying to get to lesson two!

While your story needs editing do, please, continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Total fucking crap

Rubbish

Johnny_boy95Johnny_boy95almost 11 years ago
Lol

Please continue!it will be a nice story!and it would take BostonSnowBall to bring up the snowballing lol xD

Ham9272Ham9272almost 4 years ago

Nice, Love the story and the confident female lead!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Awesome please more & Thanx !!!

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