All Comments on 'Teammates Trial Ch. 02'

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Anonymousover 8 years ago

Are you going to finish the story this time?

Anonymousover 8 years ago

SPECTACULAR

Very nice, whole I think you can get many more chapters from this, but even if it is only one PLEASE FINISH it soon. Yes 5 Stars from me. You had me hard and nearly shooting.

aclassylady over 8 years ago

good story

This is a good story on its way to being a very HOT story. I can't wait to see where you go from here. Please keep writing for there is many more ways to go. Looking forward to reading more of this great story.

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I'm a gay writer from Melbourne, Australia who is now making the move from hobby writer to proper author. The shorts here are some of my early work. More of my writing is available on my website and my podcast. I have a couple of extended short stories that I've recently publ...

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