by ozzietosser
This is a good story on its way to being a very HOT story. I can't wait to see where you go from here. Please keep writing for there is many more ways to go. Looking forward to reading more of this great story.
Very nice, whole I think you can get many more chapters from this, but even if it is only one PLEASE FINISH it soon. Yes 5 Stars from me. You had me hard and nearly shooting.