All Comments on 'Teenage Trip to Adult Cinema Pt. 01'

Apologies to those who've read and enjoyed my story. I can promise that I will get around to the follow up to tell what happened next. After writing part 1 in a flurry of enthusiasm, I found it tricky to get it published here. First it was rejected for some minor grammatical errors resulting from my haste in writing it, fair enough, I carefully rephrased and corrected appropriately. Then it was wrongly rejected for portraying underage sex, so I had to make some edits to emphasise that was not the case. Both cycles, submission and correction took a couple of weeks, so I felt a bit deflated by the end. In any case, the follow up will come along in the near future!

Don't give up, sounds like a memorable experience.... Waiting for continuation