All Comments on 'Telepath King Ch. 03'

I really like this series!!!

I really love the way you are developing this story and so wish to read more of it,I would love to see How the relationship develops between Andie,Lisa & now Mandy.

I am looking forward to the next chapter already.lol

Love the series, keep it going but don't forget about. Jack's women too, I love that one, just as much.

I am enjoying your story.

I'ld like to think that its possible, so it is a pleasant fantasy.

Please keep adding chapters.

Thanks,

RJ

Your Ch.01 was a little ruff, But it had promise! And you supplied!

I really like the lead, Tom,as he cares for his "slaves".

Yes he want to get his rocks off, what guy doesn't, but he doesn't want to hurt them.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks

RG

This thing is shot through and through with spelling and grammar mistakes. For God's sake, you're means "you are". The personal pronoun is spelled "your". You must have made that error a hundred times.

Please continue with the story! I enjoyed the subject! :)

You might want to get someone to read through your next chapters though to correct a few minor spelling errors. :)

Fantastic so far and can only get better. Keep up the good work.

Loved it. Would love to see you continue writing!

I love that story! keep on writing! I want to read more of it! Lots more

Please put them all up!!

I really enjoy your stories, but would really like if you would add chapters a little more quickly. I know I'm not the one being creative, I'm just impatient and check your author page everyday hoping...................

amazing work have to make more best stories on here

Brilliant - hope there is lots more to come....?!

Have been pretty busy lately with work and well life in general. I just put four more chapters in for approval. Up to Chapter 10 now. Got about 10 more to add. Hopefully, I'll be able to get the story done before I get to the last chapter at this point. I'm a tryin!

Thanks for reading and thanks for your positive comments. I know I have issues with Your and You're and I'm working on that, please read through it if I screw it up again!

you are going to switch genre because i was still looking in mind control

'You're' is a contraction of 'you are' . Therefore 'doing you're (you are) daily thing' is not correct - it should be 'your daily thing'. 'Your' is possessive.

Even so we do no want to, we hurt people and especially the one we love most. Therefore it is a little naive or at least immature to say „I will never hurt you“. I the story is written by a Teenager ok, otherwise a Little immature.