All Comments on 'Telepath King Ch. 14'

You are still misusing 'your' & 'you're'.

Just expand the contraction when you're (you are) using the word - eg. "I like you're (you are) pussy" should be "I like your pussy". There are many comments on this issue being posted, but you don't seem to be taking note.

If it's something that you are unable to correct, GET A PROOF READER OR EDITOR!!!!!

Seriously, it extremely frustrating to read this type of error, over and over again!!

I agree with the previous comment. This story is really good, one of my favorites of late, however you really need an editor to catch some of the grammatical errors that you miss. It happens to the best of us at times, and there is no shame in having another set of eyes catch the little things that might help improve your work and take it to another level. I would be willing, if you were so inclined. Anyways keep writing, the story is entertaining and a pleasure to read!

Man your imagination is at the peak, what a story. It just keeps getting better. MORE Please.