All Comments on 'Telepath King Ch. 21'

That was great - really wasn't expecting another chapter, at least not yet, so it was a great surprise!

Love that he stuck it to the Council - things are really hotting up now!

Brilliant work as ever - thanks so much!!

Keep up the good work.I really love this series.

I have been saying he should go after his Irish girls and you listened. Thanks.

I like how you are throwing curve balls here and there. It makes me want to read more and more to find out whats going on. As usual keep up the good job and can't wait til the next chapter.

You are doing a great job with this story.

Keep up the good job.

There are a lot of names...I had to go back

and re-read some chapters.

Keep on going!!!

Great work man, like everyone else I am always looking forward to the next chapters of this story. You have got us all hooked

Can't wait for the next installment!

Hurry with the next chapters:-)

Please keep writing this saga, I love it

I want More!! It's been over a month, this story is too good to end now!!!

What happened to Melody from chapter 17?

Please finish!

come on your fans are waiting and we all want to see what happens next

Look forward to your next chapter.

Where did his 2 yakuza guards get to? Shouldn't they have been at the house keeping things from going off the deep end- especially with Andie getting beaten in the earlier chapter?

Please finish both your stories. they were wonderful.

erm yeah i agree with every1 else.... MORE PLEASE

I started ch.1 yesterday and couldn't stop! Great story with complex characters, intricate plot, and lots of surprises. This story stands on it's own, even without any sex at all!! This is high quality, real literature, that just happens to have sex. I haven't enjoyed a novel as much as this since I read "The Three Musketeers" several years ago. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue ASAP!!!!

You're writing a fantastic story, even if the sex has tended to become repetitious.

However, it has been five months since the last submission. Don't you think it's time for another chapter or three?

While you are writing and proofing the coming chapters, do spend some time in correcting your propensity to use you're (you are) when you mean your (the possessive of you). There are other misuses of homonyms, but scattered enough not to grate.

Please let us have the rest of this interesting story sooooooooon,

TKU

Thanks to all of you that have kept reading and have been commenting. I appreciate all comments whether constructive or praise or even bad. I'm not a pro and I make mistakes, I've maintained that throughout this story and Jack's Women.

I'm working on getting my head back into the game of writing. I've been out of it for sometime. I hope to provide a continuing story line that makes you want to read more and more.

I'm sorry it took so long to get the chapters out!

Very good. I've been through the whole story and have to say that it was rather enjoyable.

The only downside I could see is that a few of the chapters were nothing more than long boink sessions that didn't advance the plot any. I thought something was up when Juliet was brought forward as his queen when the real estate agent was the one that first appeared in his dream. All of a sudden, there were two queens? Didn't make sense, but I wasn't sure if it was a continuity issue or a plot twist.

Still, it was a nice read. I could have been more condensed as a lot of the sex scenes were rather repetitive and the protagonist never really develops. 21 chapters and he's just now getting into the groove of things?

I love this story and can't wait for more

It makes me laugh that when Tom resuces the four girls you point out its juliet and three girls but when you get them back to vegas its Cassie, Gwen, Lucy and Wendy what happen to Juliet lol

Great work otherwise keep the story going

I wish you would continue this story but i would like to thank you for writing this much. I loved it!