All Comments on 'Temper'

I gave this idiotic piece of trash one star and it scored four?

at least the whole truth. TK U MLJ

The way that works is that I gave it an 11* rating!

Seriously, pretty sure intromission does NOT happen whilst falling together! Other than that, it was a cute addition to your 'flash' repertoire!

The sense of humor in this one was priceless! Great flash tale.

5 HUGE Stars!

Now, back to work.

There's a lesson for you. If you want to continue 1-bombing stories you shouldn't have read in the first place, you need to give it 4 stars. That way it will record 1 star. Try it next time. Or just keep your vote to yourself.

A really fun little vignette. The British slang only makes it better.

Slapping her? Not cool. Gripping her by the nape of the neck I would like Not a riot of laughs really 3*

What a fucking moron.

You don't have a fucking clue about anything, so shut the fuck up!

I didn't care for it very much. Sounded like a script for a bad porno. I didn't rate it however because it had potential.

Four stars, pretty original and well-written. Rogering, sounds like fun.

A very enjoyable piece. Thanks.

Thanks. tom anon

5* for a quick and funny romp!

Soak immediately in cold salty water, use plenty of salt. Rinse thoroughly in cold water before washing.

I know only too well as I had a lot of spontaneous nose bleeds when I was younger.

Fighting optional.

That’s a new one on me but I like it. Good story too.

Amazing how many times it happens in stories