All Comments on 'Ten Little Bimbos Ch. 07'

by ChrystalWynd

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Bravo

Well written and unexpected turn at end.

ReelflytReelflytover 6 years ago
Good story

Great job keeping to the story as to who is the villain . Had me going as to who it was till the end . When is your next story due ?

ChrystalWyndChrystalWyndover 6 years agoAuthor

Thanks, Reelflyt, and thank you Anonymous as well. I haven't decided yet what my next story will be, but I'm ready to start.

Lonely_readerLonely_readerabout 6 years ago
Once again, bravo!

I loved it all, even the length was not an issue (since I like longer stories).

Can't wait to read your next story!

Mymantoy999Mymantoy999about 6 years ago
I just don't know about this one?????

I love your stories and have you as one of my "favorite" authors. I frequently go back and read all your previous stories (Black Coffee, Crime: Bimbomania! Ch. 07, and Countermove Ch. 10 are some of my all time favorites on Literotica). BUT, for some reason that I really can't pinpoint, this one left me wanting. And I have no idea why that is. Ed

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Epilogue?

Fantastic story! Super hot, but a good read too, and complex. The twist at the end was great. Perhaps it deserves an epilogue? Maybe we find out who Mr. Beau is (or the details about the Blonde Concepts patrons of revenge), or maybe Paul gets a surprise when he get's home and gets taken care of to clean up loose ends? What happens to the Beau Island Bimbos? It could start with scenes of them on the island and then a hapless boater finds them, then the clean up crew comes along... so much still to tell :)

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