by Marianna2
I love the action, and it's very well written, except for one thing: Where are the enlisted? Certainly you wouldn't have all officers, would you? Apart from that, just stay consistent when writing rank. For Lieutenant you chose an abbreviation (not the standard I might add,) whereas for Captain you spelled it out. Didn't stop this from being one of my favorite stories yet, just irked me as a military man.
brilliant, perfect amount of buildup without boring me (im impatient xD) and one of the sexiest stories ive read on here. i'll never understand why i find tentacle so very hot <.< >.>
Brilliantly hilarious. Definitely one of the better stories I've read.