All Comments on 'Tentacle Madness'

by Marianna2

Sort by:
  • 4 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Yes, Sir

I like it. Fun on a strange planet.

Memento_MoriMemento_Moriover 15 years ago
Not Too Shabby, Soldier...

I love the action, and it's very well written, except for one thing: Where are the enlisted? Certainly you wouldn't have all officers, would you? Apart from that, just stay consistent when writing rank. For Lieutenant you chose an abbreviation (not the standard I might add,) whereas for Captain you spelled it out. Didn't stop this from being one of my favorite stories yet, just irked me as a military man.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
^^

brilliant, perfect amount of buildup without boring me (im impatient xD) and one of the sexiest stories ive read on here. i'll never understand why i find tentacle so very hot <.< >.>

SanialusSanialusover 14 years ago
Awesome

Brilliantly hilarious. Definitely one of the better stories I've read.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous