All Comments on 'Terone Test 05 Pt. 03'

Fantastic plot. And a good effort at character development.

Automatic translators, like google, seem to randomly assign pronouns to be male or female. That makes the narration very difficult to follow. Even without that problem, who "she" is when there are two women present is impossible.

It would really help to review what the automatic translator produces and fix up the pronouns so that "he", "she", "him" and "her" are correctly assigned.

But again, fantastic plot, Please keep writing.

please more

this plot is absolutely mind blowing