All Comments on 'That 70's Show-Ski Trip'

Holy crap that was good! You have not lost your touch. Liked that we got to see the gang and the parents in this story. Got to admit I'd been waiting to see a Bob/Kitty/Red threesome since Midge left in the series and he was always hanging around. It's never come up in any story till now and you did good. The ending with Donna though was the best hands down. Thanks for writing this!

You've proved that you can use your imagination to construct great premises.. Any chance you could do a The Office story, I'd love to see your take on a Michael banging Pam story

This was so good. You capture these characters so well and the sex is hot! I don't know which I enjoyed more, at point place or the cabin. Will say the part with Red doing kitty with the wine bottle was pretty memorable and so was Jackie with Hyde and Eric. You write their voices just like in the show!

I loved the show, but had trouble getting into shorter fanfic stories; this covered a lot of ground, and couplings, and I really enjoyed it. You write well, and the sex was exciting and real.

This story was so freaking good. It had been a long time since I'd read a story that both captured the characters well and had hot sex too. Even longer since it was a that 70s show one. Thank you for writing it! I hope you have more planned and soon, maybe the Kitty's birthday one I think had been mentioned before.

Favorite part of the story was Red watching Kitty fuck herself on the wine bottle and then him taking over. Had been wanting to read that part since Red's birthday! Thank you for adding it, it was hot!

Second favorite, Kitty being a natural at licking Midge out.

And finally Donna getting fisted by fez while Jackie sucked her nipples.

Keep these stories coming they're the best! Got to share this with others

Oh so good! Write more soon, of this 70s show. Maybe Red can put his 'foot' up Jackie or Donna's ass

Awesome story please add more. Would love to see Hyde in a foursome with Jackie and Kitty and Donna

This story was incredible, don’t know how I missed it before but I’m glad I found it now. Recent news of the reboot of the series got me looking for stories of T70s and I’m glad I found this gem.

Sad that it’s been years since you wrote a piece for the 70s but hope you might consider returning or writing a few more. Reboot can bring in the audience again and find your fantastic stories. Here’s a premise if you’re looking for one, even more f for old times sake: it’s one I don’t think you’d tackled before:

Threesome with Kitty Red and Hyde. Mostly Kitty getting some dp action from her two favorite guys, could be from the episode where Red gets cable and Hyde catches Kitty watching porn maybe your version can have him walking in on her pleasuring herself and Hyde offers his help then Red later walks in to join the fun and just when you think it can’t get hotter Donna walls in on the trio making for some Hyde and Donna and possibly Kitty and Donna action.

I know it’s a long shot but I thought I’d throw it out just in case. You’re a great and talented writer, I’m glad to see you’re still active in your writing even if it’s not the 70s. Wishing you well

you rule the 70's show

might do the series in sequence not a story on each episode but regular