All Comments on 'The 150th Slave: Alternative Ending'

That covers it.

I was hoping the alternate ending would get Laurel and that we would get to see what went on where the slaves went after the show was over.

I hope there is more to come.

This is only the alternative Part Four. There will be four more parts to the alternative ending plus a postscript that goes with both endings.

Roseyfingers

I slowly became obsessed with The Lottery. The whole concept is fascinating to me. There is so much tension in your stories. It's so dark, but it isn't completely disturbing like some non-con stories on here. Well, in the first one when a man mentioned bestiality I was pretty freaked out, but you've confirmed that doesn't happen much so I can relax. The way you write about how on some level the women chosen want this life makes it fine for me. It's not one of those where the women are kidnapped and forced, I hate those. This choice where it's a risk and they're afraid but also sort of interested... I love it.

I check back every day to see if you've written more.