All Comments on 'The 150th Slave Pt. 01'

The style of this narrative is so nicely short and full of irony and sarcasm. It was really fun reading this piece of writing. I haven't read the prior story, but it was really interesting. The BLC reminds me of Norman's Gor gone satire.

There are a few typos in the text. And that is actually everythign negative I can say about this piece of writing, as much as I would want to help improve any author's writings.

The writing style is like that of a confession interview in a documentary as shown in the weeks of International Documentary Filmfestivals.

I do not find it very exciting sexually but it is highly interesting. It answers some of women's most coveted fantasies.

I could not find this

Sex Slave Lottery was removed after a complaint that it did not follow rules. I am going to try to get it back up when I find time.

not much a bit boring if the woman had been chosen and used as a cunt and pain slave it might have been better