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All Comments on 'The 150th Slave Pt. 05: Alternative Ending'

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bridannabridannaover 8 years ago

More please finish the 150th slave, oh how I wish I could be that 150th slave.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Is it just me?

Or does it seem like Svetlana has a not-strictly-business interest in seeing Laurel lose?

HorridtruthHorridtruthover 8 years ago
Prefer this ending so far

Crystal became human and sympathetic, which she hadn't been in any of the other chapters. I don't know what this says about me, but I prefer it when the loser is someone I care about.

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