All Comments on 'The 150th Slave Pt. 05: Original Ending'

No more of this absolute drivel.

I can imagine a lot of people being uncomfortable with this story. But you know exactly what a submissive longs for and fears at the same time. And you have written it wonderfully. Your story cost me my night rest but is worth it every single line.

Good story and character development - still waiting for the alternate ending though.

Should have the beginning of it posted early next week. It will be too kinky for many.

I can't wait. What a fascinating concept the lottery was.

Great story enjoyed it.

I’ll stick with the original ending though. Much better finish than the alternatives.