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All Comments on 'The 150th Slave Pt. 05: Original Ending'

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WargamerWargamerover 4 years ago
Great story

Great story enjoyed it.

I’ll stick with the original ending though. Much better finish than the alternatives.

TREKnRayTREKnRayalmost 9 years ago
150th Slave Lottery Alternate Ending.

I can't wait. What a fascinating concept the lottery was.

roseyfingersroseyfingersalmost 9 years agoAuthor
Working on alternative ending

Should have the beginning of it posted early next week. It will be too kinky for many.

etb70etb70almost 9 years ago
Excellent

Good story and character development - still waiting for the alternate ending though.

Cindy1001Cindy1001almost 9 years ago
Very intense

I can imagine a lot of people being uncomfortable with this story. But you know exactly what a submissive longs for and fears at the same time. And you have written it wonderfully. Your story cost me my night rest but is worth it every single line.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Please spare us

No more of this absolute drivel.

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