All Comments on 'The 150th Slave Pt. 08: Alternative Ending'

How about you write something that makes any sense at all? No stars.

This version sucks and makes no sense at all.

I've found the first part of this chapter very good and I wanted to give you 5 stars ... but the other 80% of the story is sad or boring ... so I've given you only 2 stars as an average

Good segment I was thinking that the slave's freedom from the boredom of mundane activities like laundry, doing dishes, deciding what to make for dinner and housework might be worth the tradeoff for some. Until I got to the part withered she had to give up her child so sad.