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All Comments on 'The 19th Hole'

by skywayscribe

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pavlovpavlovalmost 13 years ago
It's too short!

The theme would be perfect, but it's too short!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Drips Naivety!

You are how old? Fifteen, sixteen.?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Check what you THINK you've written!

1) Use some imagination.

2) Don't be in so much of a hurry.

3) Check your grammar, spelling and English.

4) Get an Editor to check what you've written and to give you advice on HOW TO WRITE.

Otherwise, not bad for a beginner.

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