The Accidental Lesbian

This is a story that peaks my interest! I am an Army Brat and the story is totally exclusively a lot of IFS. If this, If that....

I liked the story all the way through. It was entertaining and also was a lot of war!

Not to long, sir, could have been longer.

Oppose the war, support those who served - ours as well as yours.

5*, thanks for sharing.

Dion (UK)

Your ztory hit all the buttons. Loved it start to finish. Keep writing please. I love well developed stories

Entertaining

FYI - Wandering is NOT the same as wondering. Wander is roaming around- wonder is awe inspiring

I gave your story five stars. It had character development and characters with personalities beyond 'hot horny woman suddenly craves pussy'. I hate those stories, with their generic, walking, talking boob delivery systems. This was a proper story.

Beautiful story…you could have built the getting together a bit more… perhaps add one or two dates before the sex… the girls role and feelings could be developed a bit more…loved the openness of her children to her feelings and needs… the frank talking and involving her children….for me definitely 5+ you are a very talented writer…

Thought the story was well written and addressed the stress of combat well (never having been in it myself). The only issue I have about the story is the first dinner they had and then the sleep over. Seems a little much for a first timer to jump into bed on first date with kids in same house and they go screaming while having sex. That was a stretch. It would have been much more believable if you could have stretched the whole dating thing out a bit.

Still, 5/5

J

as a vetran of viet namn, great story.

Excellent. Love will find a way. Screw the press, they don’t care about people.

This story is one of my favorites. Can't count how many times I have come back to this for another great read. Thanks for your wonderful story!

For me, the discussions about sex did come too fast, and the action in bed too - pretty brutal and visceral. The military part was too big a chunk - sorry - but it's obvious you know what you're talking about there. But let's overlook both the above because it's a powerful and heartfelt story, coming alive off the page(screen): a fine piece.

Loved it! Most stories with military references really make a hash of it but you obviously know what you're talking about it and that made a good story great. Thank you!

Succinct lovely story well written, can't ask for much more. More power to your fingertips.

The accidental meeting on the road was cute, and the followup with the spilled coffee was fine. But if Theresa's attraction to Dano was based on a perceived similarity to Bad Ass Bob, that cuts very very deep. I think proceeding thru a meeting with the kids straight to sex on the first date is getting intensely personal extremely fast, and doesn't make sense. It would take almost anybody some serious "getting to know" time before they could feel like they weren't disrespecting Bob's memory by fucking right away. And Dano really needs time to grieve her Marine mentor. She has barely realized the guy is dead, and she's fucking his wife already?? Sorry, unless both of them are high on Ecstasy and booze too, it's just not normal for them to fuck. Also, Becca's flirting and wish to seduce Dano is creepy, inappropriate and warrants some discussion with Theresa to get the ground rules settled first.

Too much to do, all people with integrity would devote some time and effort to these important personal and family issues before putting pleasure-seeking at a high priority.

This to me was a very powerful story.

I thought it was one of the best , and if someone

doesn't like it because there was not enough sex

they need to look somewhere else.

What a power story with strong, realistic characters. It was a great mix of the reality that so many of some of our soldiers go through after their horrific experiences in combat and the wonderful, passion and sex that the two main characters shared.

You've either served or you're an Army brat!! Good read! Great Story! It could have

been longer; but, it didn't need to be. It could not have been shorter! Incredible

characters and great development. I'm begging for a sequel. Thank you for sharing this short, but deep, story with us.

Your story could have been twice the length and I would have been ecstatic. The problem with too many stories on Literotica is that they rush headlong toward blistering sex scenes without fully developed characters. You did a very nice job in avoiding this unfortunate mistake. I enjoyed your work immensely and would love to see a sequel(s) involving Becca and her time at the Academy.

Too right I will, has I have read it so often, I lost count.

Maybe do a sequel on Theresa's children, find their perfect girlfriend or wife (if not 'In Love' with their sister) because I always thought that Theresa will lose Dana to her oldest every time I read this at a couple of points.

Great story and well written. MORE of this.