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"Well, I was terribly horny. I guess I can say that on this kind of show," Theresa smiled and joked. "And Dana gave me a speeding ticket and then we literally bumped into each other and I spilled coffee down her uniform and...well...I mean I never thought about sex with a woman before that day we bumped into each other. But she was - is - very cute, and of course, she's military and well, I guess it was just a happy accident we wound up together. But I'm very thankful for that accident. We started going to church and then she moved in and well, here we are." Dana nodded in agreement as her fingertips played lightly on the nape of Theresa's neck.
The producer hung her head and said, "Cut."
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I will save some of you the trouble of correcting the length of the story. Yeah, there were some long parts in here that didn't need to be here - assuming all this was was an effort to get an older woman and younger woman in bed. But it was and is more than that; it's a story about people and family. Maybe it is too short. But, as they say, "it is what it is," eh?
Thanks for reading.
- COMMENTS
kbone19 months agoThis is a story that peaks my interest! I am an Army Brat and the story is totally exclusively a lot of IFS. If this, If that....
I liked the story all the way through. It was entertaining and also was a lot of war!
Anonymous12 months agoNot to long, sir, could have been longer.
Oppose the war, support those who served - ours as well as yours.
5*, thanks for sharing.
Dion (UK)
skillmanabout 1 year agoYour ztory hit all the buttons. Loved it start to finish. Keep writing please. I love well developed stories
kboneoneover 1 year agoEntertaining
FYI - Wandering is NOT the same as wondering. Wander is roaming around- wonder is awe inspiring
texlooover 1 year agoI gave your story five stars. It had character development and characters with personalities beyond 'hot horny woman suddenly craves pussy'. I hate those stories, with their generic, walking, talking boob delivery systems. This was a proper story.
Reading_is4funover 1 year agoBeautiful story…you could have built the getting together a bit more… perhaps add one or two dates before the sex… the girls role and feelings could be developed a bit more…loved the openness of her children to her feelings and needs… the frank talking and involving her children….for me definitely 5+ you are a very talented writer…
Anonymousover 2 years agoThought the story was well written and addressed the stress of combat well (never having been in it myself). The only issue I have about the story is the first dinner they had and then the sleep over. Seems a little much for a first timer to jump into bed on first date with kids in same house and they go screaming while having sex. That was a stretch. It would have been much more believable if you could have stretched the whole dating thing out a bit.
Still, 5/5
J
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoExcellent. Love will find a way. Screw the press, they don’t care about people.
rml65about 3 years agoThis story is one of my favorites. Can't count how many times I have come back to this for another great read. Thanks for your wonderful story!
Only_connectover 3 years agoFor me, the discussions about sex did come too fast, and the action in bed too - pretty brutal and visceral. The military part was too big a chunk - sorry - but it's obvious you know what you're talking about there. But let's overlook both the above because it's a powerful and heartfelt story, coming alive off the page(screen): a fine piece.
ramblin2020over 3 years agoLoved it! Most stories with military references really make a hash of it but you obviously know what you're talking about it and that made a good story great. Thank you!
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoSuccinct lovely story well written, can't ask for much more. More power to your fingertips.
Anonymousover 4 years agoThe accidental meeting on the road was cute, and the followup with the spilled coffee was fine. But if Theresa's attraction to Dano was based on a perceived similarity to Bad Ass Bob, that cuts very very deep. I think proceeding thru a meeting with the kids straight to sex on the first date is getting intensely personal extremely fast, and doesn't make sense. It would take almost anybody some serious "getting to know" time before they could feel like they weren't disrespecting Bob's memory by fucking right away. And Dano really needs time to grieve her Marine mentor. She has barely realized the guy is dead, and she's fucking his wife already?? Sorry, unless both of them are high on Ecstasy and booze too, it's just not normal for them to fuck. Also, Becca's flirting and wish to seduce Dano is creepy, inappropriate and warrants some discussion with Theresa to get the ground rules settled first.
Too much to do, all people with integrity would devote some time and effort to these important personal and family issues before putting pleasure-seeking at a high priority.
Anonymousabout 5 years agoThis to me was a very powerful story.
I thought it was one of the best , and if someone
doesn't like it because there was not enough sex
they need to look somewhere else.
