All Comments on 'The Adventures of Modesty Girl Pt. 01'

Modesty Girl's big problem will be maintaining her modesty.

Hope you continue...

Now, that is a flight of fancy.

As the previous commenter said, this is a fun story, based on a clever premise. Fantasy stories can have difficulties explaining how the fantastic situation came about, but this story skipped lightly past that obstacle with 'voices in the head or maybe aliens' and went straight on from there.

I thought the writing style was very basic and that suited the story. If Mr AnonPerv decides to continue the story, I look forward to her future adventures. I hope the Penny doesn't drop. (Sorry, couldn't help myself.)

Lue

Please continue with more of your superhero. Looking forward to them. Thank you.

I love this story. I can't wait to read more.

Nice twist on super powers, embarrassment gives them. Cool! Now the question is, How does she not become desensitized to her nudity so that it no longer gives her powers? What will she have to do in the future to get the powers?

Great start, please continue the story.

Definitely worth continuing, Thanks for posting it for us.

Really cun