All Comments on 'The Adventures of Ted and Mark Ch. 02'

Look forward to more.

I like the phrase and the story left me with excitement and anticipation. The details about cards falling are frustrating but that is good as they make me wait for the parts I want to here. The touching is great stuff and the bouncing back between touching and card playing is great.

At the end I want to say “wait a minute you guys. What happens in the bedroom?’ But you give me the strip poker story you promised. I’ll be waiting for the next chapter.