All Comments on 'The Alley'

isn't worth the effort. Not awful, but pretty generic. You do have writing talent, and just need something original to write about.

Great story. I have had that daydream many a time. Hope to have the chance to live it out someday, but your story made it seem real for now, so ignore the guy who made the comment about the story not being worth the effort. It was a story you wrote because it obviously turned you on and it will do the same for others, so good job and do write more.

Why would he leave her naked if it's a role play ?

Good writer. Feel ripped off. Not non consensual. Really don't like this kind of ending.