All Comments on 'The Allure of Alyna'

A story about as appealing and erotic as a bowl of cold grybnoy (mushroom soup).

What are friends for? That's called looking after your buddies & share & share a like!!

The author paints a fine pair of tits. Excellent. 4*

Make that your one and only story! Dude sounded like a dirty old perverted freak! Not erotic at all!!!

If you get your Sweetie drunk so she will do things you know she would not do sober, you might as well be feeding her a date-rape drug! Maybe that would be better, so she doesn't remember what you forced her to do! Not erotic! (No matter HOW big and luscious her tits are!)

Good job man! Don't listen to anybody and keep writing.

Personaly I have almost fetish love for Russian wife's getting fucked!!!

I liked the story however it would have been better with a bit more detail in not only the characters but everything that was happening.

I agree. A re-write with more story would be good. However you are talented and loved this story as is! Keep up the good work!

Fantastic read!!! Keep them coming, one of the best in loving wives!