All Comments on 'The Architect Becomes Her Ch. 01'

by Mistress_Joli

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rombo034rombo034over 12 years ago

You are building a really intense anticipation. Looking forward to reading Ch.2.

A.

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 12 years ago
A very lovely tale.

Thank you.

her_secrether_secretover 12 years ago

nice beginning...looking forward to follow-up

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Excellent!

Style, characterization and development are great. I really like that the author can write good English and can spell correctly.

MrWhiteTigerMrWhiteTigerover 12 years ago
Fun to read

Wonderful. This looks fabulous. Looking forward to more...much more.

Helen1899Helen1899about 2 years ago

Show's great promise. I hope the sex is erotic when it finally arrives

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