All Comments on 'The Architect Becomes Her Ch. 01'

by Mistress_Joli

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Helen1899Helen1899over 2 years ago

Show's great promise. I hope the sex is erotic when it finally arrives

MrWhiteTigerMrWhiteTigeralmost 13 years ago
Fun to read

Wonderful. This looks fabulous. Looking forward to more...much more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Excellent!

Style, characterization and development are great. I really like that the author can write good English and can spell correctly.

her_secrether_secretalmost 13 years ago

nice beginning...looking forward to follow-up

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 13 years ago
A very lovely tale.

Thank you.

rombo034rombo034almost 13 years ago

You are building a really intense anticipation. Looking forward to reading Ch.2.

A.

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