by kelly_kelly
story started out really well! but then what happened?!? you should have kept going with all the good details and whatnot, you built it up well and then on the second page it all fizzled out. she finishes the assignment gets married and then the end. wish it didn't end that way...this could have been a lot longer!
KK
As always you write with such passion and your stories always bring the erotic to the page. I love the way you had her on the horse with the 'old artist', how you brought Elisa from her shadow and let her bloom. Beautiful story, beautifully written.