All Comments on 'The Assistant Pt. 01'

Can t wait to read next chapter, that was good. wish i was her slave

Oh boy, could we please have another? That one made me happy. I love little bitch slaggs. Evebroughtanaxthistime

Pretty tame, not at all erotic, and not worth my time to read

then don't read it! The world is full of things you may well like better.

But I. for one, think this is a terrific start, and I can't wait for the next part.

The contract isn't worth the paper it's written on. And lots of other jobs are available. He couldn't find anything in several weeks? That was laughable. And she's been paying in cash? I bet he previous people have been paid in cash. I call to the IRS and her world gets turned upside down. A picture on an i-phone may earn her a trip to jail. Epic stupidity. No stars.

Wouldn't tell nobody 'bout nothing if I was getting my share at the end of it. And if telling could end my own ass up in jail - it would be pretty stu...wait minute! One is pretty damn able to pay $hlurpy his tax. One does not have to go to jail. This slave is free to be a slave! Jubilation!

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