All Comments on 'The Au Pair'

I got lost about the last third. I'm not an editor but can see this needs one. Still a good tale. Keep writing

The ending is a cute surprise. The story is nice , though it seems a bit quick. And yes, an editor would be beneficial.

For the story tags, I saw no "cunnilingus", just coitus & fellatio (the "blowjob").

pls get an Editor! He, she-it. Who is narrating and in what tense?

Needs more than an editor - it is as screwed up a piece of writing as ever was posted to this site.

Thanks for the feed back. On any future writings I will look into an editor.