All Comments on 'The Awakening'

Well told.

I was surprised that the whole dominant/submission thing seems to disappear. For example, he had told her she could not cum until he said, but she did ... several times.

I know it is hard to proofread one's own work (which is why many authors get someone else to help), but there seemed to be a lot of missing words. Readers will enjoy your work more if you can catch those before posting.

Anon1, I think I explained why Javier diverted away from the rules. As for editing, I do the best I can, live with it.

Anon2, if you truly believe fetishes and romance can't coexist, then you are as sad and pathetic as your all caps rant indicates.

Made sitting in the airport during a delayed flight very enjoyable.

I really enjoyed how you brought the characters to life and their development. I also liked the D/s play as it too can be extremely romantic when the right people are in play. Other than grammar and sentence structure errors, one of my favorite stories.