All Comments on 'The Babysitter'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
BEAUTIFULLY

erotic story ~ wonderfully expressed :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Very nice

Very well written. ... enjoyed it....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
It was a pretty good story.

I would have liked to have seen more dialog, but I did enjoy reading the story. Someone will want to comment that having sex with the babysitter without waking her is impossible, but I have to disagree. You would be amazed at the number of people who sleep so heavily that it is extremely difficult to wake them up.

sirhugssirhugsalmost 11 years ago
more an outline than a story

and how can she be completely unaware if she's full of cum? Surely she'd notice?

Promising premise, well articulated scenario, but ultimately more tease than please.

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