All Comments on 'The Ballad of Zachery Carson Ch. 06'

"Us" or Neigil and Kathlen? Long story has to have a love interest and conflict.

Are yóu Still around ;at all anymore?! Mr. Woodmanone.? Be nice to read sóme móre of your stories sir.. Hope your around somewhere at least? Maybe fishing for trout or catfish somewhere? Or maybe branding a steer... Hmm. 🙄🤔👍😉😁🍻

I realize this was a good place to end the chapter, but it certainly leaves us hanging. Hopefully Lady Kathleen will tell Zach that she plans to stay at the ranch and the romancing can begin. Great story, really enjoying it.

You write great and the westerns are my favorites. Wouldn't bother me a bit if you stuck with them and became more prolific as well!

Keep up the great work.

is when the reader gets to the end of the chapters and says ... damn ... I have to wait until tomorrow!

You really do like to put us on the edge of the cliff. It really at this point sounds as if Kathleen was happy to be back with him........

You've written you have written another great chapter in this series of Zack Carson. I wonder what you going to do with Zack and Kathleen in the next chapter? In some way I hope that they get together after all they've been through in the first couple of chapters. Keep up the good work.

Mark

just a little cruel to stop at the point you did, can't wait for the next chapter.