All Comments on 'The Barcelona Series Pt. 04'

Fantastic story!!!!!!!!!!

Count on it it's trash. That cuck only reads trash. Moving on.

At least OOAA has the balls to sign his name. I did find more errors in this than the others, but I like them all even if I personally wouldn't want to be a cuckold. I do enjoy both reading and writing about this and many other subjects. Anyway, OKAYJACK, keep up the good work. Oh yeah, the glaring error, Irene became Maggie early on. Must admit I wonder about that. Could Maggie be the real live woman from your past?

Your anglicized name of that gorgeous god Athena put me off. There are a thousand and more beautiful spanish girl's names. Irene sits well on a fair skinned lass - hence my inability to picture the slutty dark cheating wife...so 3*

This was poorly written, regardless of subject matter. Starting with the name changes. Not a single clever thing. Not a single decent, likeable character. It simply wasn't interesting or entertaining to read.

Or is that many.

Where does she display that love in he story?

Masterbatory dreamings of a male virgin junior high school student!

No stars.

Be interesting if when he returns she's about two months pregnant.

OOAA, like Odiouser, never met a cuck story that he didn’t drool over.

IRL, a selfish,narcissistic cunt would deserve to get her face slapped and her ass to be bounced off of the curb. This wife is now just a "female", no longer a woman or lady,so she doesn't warrant any special protection any longer.