All Comments on 'The BDSM Sex Story Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Suggestion ...

The best Doms actually experience first what they plan to do to their sibs. If you have never tried something, you won't really know if you are doing it right. You might actually try some of what you plan on inflicting. You would be better able to write with more realism rather than the obvious ignorance you've displayed so far. I liked the way you tried to respond to your readers and deal with the noncom issue. Best wishes toward your future chapters.

blurobluroover 6 years agoAuthor

Thanks. I don't think I'll be continuing this. While BDSM is one of my favorite kinds of XXX, others are right - I actually don't know enough to write on it. I think I'll be ending this story where it is - it's officially dead. I'll be starting a new one soon under regular romance :D and let's see where that takes us.

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