The Beach for Two

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The woman pulled away as she moaned out loud and Janice realized Frank wasn't giving the woman the slow methodical thrusting he had given her. Frank was pounding away at her determined to give the stranger what he hadn't given his own wife. Behind her the other man did likewise, thrusting into Janice with a determination to get the job done. While both men had made love to their own women, they were trying to fuck each others.

Janice struggled to come to terms with the cock in her body not being her husbands. She tried to convince herself this wasn't happening that she wasn't having sex with a stranger, but the sensation welling up inside her reminded her very clearly she was.

The mix of emotions and the change of pace sent the sensation building inside her into overdrive. Her voice began to escape in panting moans as each powerful thrust only accentuated the fact that she was being fucked. Not love, not sex, just a good hard fucking and she realized she absolutely loved it.

Her body shook and she wailed in pleasure, across from her the other woman did the same. Frank was pounding away at her taking her forcefully. He had her by the waist and he was pulling her down into his thrusts making her take every inch. Behind her she too was held firmly by the waist but he was more determined to thrust up into her, riding his cock almost completely out before hammering it back home. He rode her like an animal, like he was a wolf and she was in heat.

Her body responded with absolute ecstasy, tingling through every single thrust and building a fury inside her that needed release. In the distance the waves crashed on the shore and filled the air with a dull rolling sound. She felt the cool ocean air as it blew across her heated skin. She felt the thundering of a strangers cock inside her body struggling desperately to fill her with its white release.

Across from her a woman cried out, her voice little more than desperate gasps, as she crashed over the limit of what she could take. She heard Frank groan and saw his thrust into her deep and determined as his filled her body with his seed.

The sight of him coming made her aware of what was going to happen to her, that a stranger was about to fill her. The fear and excitement sent her heart racing even faster, her breathing quaked as he hammered at her. She heard him making groaning noises that only come when a man is ready to leave his mark. She couldn't bear it any longer. Her stomach heaved and her legs went tight. She threw her head back and let her voice fly as her orgasm exploded through her body. Behind her a voice joined hers and she felt him thrust in as deeply as he could filling her with his milky gift.

She wailed as he continued to thrust pumping everything he had into her body. Her heart skipped at beat at the thought that a stranger was coming in her. She held her ground and took everything he had, determined to give him all he wanted of her.

Her world was a blur when he finally slowed his rhythm, finally allowing her orgasm to begin abating. Even after he slid out, her pussy felt like it was vibrating, and she was wet down to her knees. Both women fell forward onto the sand and laid where their lips were a hairs width apart. The shared their breath as they both tried to come to terms with what just happened.

For long moments they both just laid there breathing, letting the rolling aftershocks of orgasmic sex with a stranger course trough their bodies.

After a while she heard the other mans voice.

"How long are you folks here?" He asked

"Till Friday." She heard Frank respond.

"You staying here in a beach house?" The stranger asked.

"Yeah just up the beach, you?"

"We are in one just off the beach about three houses in."

They were both silent for a moment, and Janice just kept her eyes closed listening to the sound of the waves, trying to catch her breath.

"What do you say we trade till Friday then?" The stranger asked.

Janice didn't have any energy to be shocked by the proposition. Nor was she surprised when Frank readily agreed to the exchange.

Ten minutes latter Frank left with his new temporary wife hand in hand. The were kissing and talking quietly as she watched them walk up the beach.

Janice steadied her heart as she turned to face her new husband for the week. He took her hand and lifted her up. They shared a kiss and she was surprised how passionate she made it.

She took his hand and he lead her home, for the next week she would make love to him again and again, she wished they had been staying for a month.

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EM_Lockiel_51EM_Lockiel_518 months ago

Great story omnive you do need to work on your grammar quite a lot yet but despite all that the story was very interesting though. it would be a good idea to get someone to edit your story for you if you can do that that should help your writing quite a lot then.

MarkthegeekMarkthegeekover 1 year ago

Simply about the Hottest exhibitionist story I can imagine…THEN it morphs into Wife-swapping! What a turn-on!

BuzzCzarBuzzCzarover 1 year ago

Somehow I missed this one when it was originally written. Yeah, some grammar errors but the story, the fantasy was truly erotic.

lash2718rlash2718rabout 2 years ago

You seemed to use the words break and brake interchangeably. They seemed to be opposites. Was this intentional?

shypussshypussalmost 8 years ago

Fun story...and a little jealous!

omnivomnivabout 9 years agoAuthor
Thank you.

I would like to thank those of you who left constructive feedback, and those of you who took the time to send me a private message.

I see I have quite a bit of learning to do, and growing in the areas of proper mechanics and grammar. I have considered going back to the local college and taking some of the basic English courses. I unfortunately managed to squeak by school with the bare minimum grades in English to pass, and it clearly shows.

I have many more stories already written from all over the spectrum of things you find in literotica, but I feel I should not release them until I can at least improve my mechanics.

I will explore the possibility of using the editor system here to get some more of them up while I work to improve. Ha I could swamp a poor editor in stories in a heartbeat to be honest. I have been writing as many as three a day. I find erotic stories come very natural to me, and I have a desire to write more and more.

Again thank you all for your comments. I only posted this because my wife read a story I had written and insisted it was good and convinced me to put up just one and see what people thought. I had no idea people would actually like it.

I promise I will work on my core skills and improve my mechanics getting better and better in every story.

Thank you.

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
Will she still be alive by Friday?

If she is, and hopefully it will be without physical harm, what combination of Infections and diseases will he leave in parting? And if her husband does come back at the end of the trade, what STDs will he bring back with him?

They have never met. They don't even know their names. No contact information is exchanged in case of emergency. And they could be a team operating as recruiters for . . . .

These flippant decisions were made with total disregard for the health and safety of the wives.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Total asshole husbands; don't even know who they have given their wives to.

If she wanted the other guy for a month instead of a week, why not just switch until they get bored again? Then go find other couples on the beech to switch with. Maybe with enough switching the original couple will get rematched again, someday. Not that it matters. Its just animal fucking, not love. Kind of wrong category: there are no loving spouses in this story.

LickideesplitLickideesplitabout 9 years ago
Answer the Question

In the biography, Omniv asks about his writing. His friends are kinda right. The Writing Mechanics really SUCK!

BUT ... the story is REALLY good! The pacing is fine. I would quibble a little about why Hubby is not identified as such until near the end, since there is no sense of the couple trying to evade a significant third party. The sex is well described ... starts out fairly vanilla except for Sweetie's tension about discovery. But (the guy we finally are told is) Hubby does a great job of pushing Sweetie's limits. Then the limits get kicked up another notch ... then again with a girl-girl kiss. Then WAY up with a quick switch and change of pace. And then another giant step with a temporary live-in partner trade! Good-bye vanilla! Maybe French Vanilla with vanilla bean and habanero chile. And sprinkles! In a chocolate-dipped waffle cone!

Given Sweetie's recognition that she needed to loosen up, I disagree with Impo. I think this marriage has the potential to really go into overdrive.

Omniv ... just apply for a Volunteer Editor to work with you, and pay him or her close attention, because your writing, right now, probably causes many readers to cast you as incompetent and turn to a different story after catching the second BIG goof in your FIRST paragraph.

5* (great first effort, despite terrible mechanics)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Good hot story

Its a hot tale that I enjoyed, I saw some problems in its execution though, mostly in the confusion over homonyms. That is words that sound the same but are spelled differently such as brake, and break, there, their, site, sight. There were a couple of other misused words as well that sneaked in. But other than those errors I thought it was a fun fantasy.

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