All Comments on 'The Beating of a Stranger's Heart'

...furlough comes soon. You're dangerous.

Could have been longer but short and sweet.

Will

It was well written and good alliteration. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

The story is simply put, amazing. One of the best I have read thus far. From the very beginning it draws you in and wraps you up. I love it!!

such passion and temptation...great setup trying to resist then the passion taking you over. gets my heart pumping just thinking about it!

Great story thank you for sharing, you can tell how deep your passion runs!!!!!

To those who have left comments Thank you!!! I really appreciate those who've taken the time to do so!

For your first story this is an awesome attempt :D

Fantastic description and plot, a little short, but too the point. :)

I look forward to more stories :)

I thought I had commented before but it seems not to have been posted. Loved your story and certainly want to encourage you to continue. Thanks for the quick chat in the room the other morning.

hugs wendy g

damn that was very hot indeed...loved it

You dear are very talented. Loved it. Hope to read a lot more of your stories. Very hot

Thump

No doubt about it, you're a damn fine writer! You keep writing and I'll keep reading. :)

This was indeed hot! The relentless passion of the guy, the reluctant lust of the married woman, the culmination of both, indeed this was hot!